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Monday, 16 August 2021

the magic closet

 Out of nowhere there was a closet in the lounge. I asked my mum and dad ¨where did you get that closet from? I have never seen it here?¨ we just moved into a house 2 weeks ago and i'm still figuring out where the toilet is. ¨oh we found it at a garage sale i thought it will look good in your room¨. ¨but mum where are you going to put it i have a tiny room¨ oh well we thought we would give you the guest room that's pretty big¨ wait wait a minute I'M GETTING THE GUEST ROOM AHHHH i can´t believe it ok calm down jasmin calm down. ¨omg thanks mum and dad i love you guys¨ i ran to my old room that is the tiny room and packed my stuff and put it in my big room. ¨ahh room sweet room¨ I jumped on my bed then put my stuff away.


when I was done putting my stuff away mum and dad brang my closet in and i told them just to ¨put it in the corna by the door so i can put my clothes in there¨ ¨ok¨ dad said, they put the closet where i wanted it to go and as soon as they left i got my clothes and opened the door. I dropped my clothes and went in the closet because it seemed a bit bigger then it looked like. I closed the closet door and it was dark like i was in a deep sleep i opened the closet door and something was not right wait no everything was not right i was in a long dress in the biggest room i have ever been in there was a big bed, a big window, everything I could ask for. i walked out of the closet and looked in the mirror this was a dream come true i had a real crown on my head i was a princess. When was looking in the mirror for about 2 minutes until...



A maid came into my room and said ¨its almost time for bed sweety¨ i did not know what i should say do i just said ¨ok thank you uhhhh? ¨you forgot again right?¨ ¨uhhh yeah yeah i did¨ ¨sarah sarah timothon¨ ¨oh yeah thank you ha¨ why dose that name sound familiar. She left the room and i run in at the closet to go home so i could go to sleep but i tripped because i was in high heels i went to the closet and closed the door than opened it again i was back in my normal room and in my normal clothes i had a bath and brushed my teeth then i went back to my room and put my pjs on. I walked to my bed and mum came in to tack me in and singed to me well i close my eyes and go to sleep.


i feel asleep and dreamed about what happened and what does the palace look like.until the next morning came and my mum came into my room to say ¨breakfast is ready sweety¨ ¨ok mum thank you¨ ¨your welcome its your favorite PANCAKES!!¨ ¨PANCAKES YAY! THANKS MOM¨ ¨ill be down in 5 minutes¨. i got dressed and went into the closet, i closed the door and opened it again i was back in the palace. then went out of the closet and went out of the room there where so many doors and a long hallway.  i opened a door and i saw the Queen talking to sarah i could barely hear them but they´re were saying. ¨Are you sure this is going to work your majesty¨ ¨i sure....only if she doesn't figure it out so DON'T be sus¨.


 Anyway can you please go and make her some breakfast make her pancake it´s her favorite¨ ¨ yes miss¨wait ¨were they talking about me?¨. ¨i got to go¨ when i was running back to my room i tripped on my high heels. It was a loud BANG! the maid looked behind her and saw me. she ran to me and grabbed me and she said ¨we have to talk jasmin¨ i was scared because how did she know my name i didn't tell her my name ¨h-how do you know my name i didn´t tell you it¨ ¨well..me and you´r mum has to talk to you in the room i was just in¨.

My heart dropped ¨wait what do you mean my mum doesn't know im here¨ then she said something that changed my life ¨that's not your mother...¨. I froze in fear i did not know what to do, do i push her and run back to the closet or go with her?. Well this is the Queens maid and the Queen is right in that room so i´ma go and say ¨fine ill go with you but you have to explain everything¨. i went in the room and the Queen looked at me worried and grabbed sarah and whispered ¨come with me i have to talk to you¨ the Queen toke sarah into the back room and i followed along. i opened the door just a little and i heard the where saying ¨what are you doing bringing her in this room holding her like that¨ ¨But Miss....she knows¨ everything went quiet and they both looked at me.then they ran to me and took me to a secret room....







        



2 comments:

  1. Hey Dillyn,
    I really like how you added a lot of detail but I think you could have done like part one part to on each blog of the week so its not to long. But besides that I really like you blog. Why did you choose to do a long blog?
    Alivia

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  2. Kai ora Dillyn Millie here your blog is great! Can we hear a part two, maybe next time you could cheek your spelling a capital letters. Tuhinga ka whai mai Millie

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